Vickie, you have met the deadline and considering some of the dificulties you faced with the technology, I appreciate the effort. However, you are still a long way from where I believe you should be. You are working at a level 2 at the moment, but I think with effort, we could make this a level 3 - you must listen to the advice I give you in order to raise your grade. You must proof read your work there are a lot of errors particularly in your customer and editorial profiles as they seem rushed (no need really as you had a lot of time). You also must address formatting issues like left alignment of text/scanned images going into slideshare or photobucket (which I have constantly told you about). These simple changes will bring up your grade. If slideshare continues to be a problem, you MUST see me and I will sort it out. There is promise and potential, we just need to make some subtle changes. Enjoy the rest of Christmas. Miss L
List of things left to complete...it is a long list! 1) Image montage powerpoint 2) Pie chart data from q'aire and write up 3) Flat plans for f/c,contents and dps 4) Storyboard mise en scene for at least 6 shots. I will not let you move on with creating your coursework until these elements are completed - there is so much you need to catch up on, I had to use an extra post!
Vickie,
ReplyDeleteyou have met the deadline and considering some of the dificulties you faced with the technology, I appreciate the effort. However, you are still a long way from where I believe you should be. You are working at a level 2 at the moment, but I think with effort, we could make this a level 3 - you must listen to the advice I give you in order to raise your grade. You must proof read your work there are a lot of errors particularly in your customer and editorial profiles as they seem rushed (no need really as you had a lot of time). You also must address formatting issues like left alignment of text/scanned images going into slideshare or photobucket (which I have constantly told you about). These simple changes will bring up your grade. If slideshare continues to be a problem, you MUST see me and I will sort it out. There is promise and potential, we just need to make some subtle changes. Enjoy the rest of Christmas. Miss L
List of things left to complete...it is a long list!
ReplyDelete1) Image montage powerpoint
2) Pie chart data from q'aire and write up
3) Flat plans for f/c,contents and dps
4) Storyboard mise en scene for at least 6 shots.
I will not let you move on with creating your coursework until these elements are completed - there is so much you need to catch up on, I had to use an extra post!